Whoops – I’m late in posting this. But there it is – the clean line art that will appear in the finished book. A few small changes were made between the rough sketch and here. (That link’s included in case you’re somehow not viewing this on my site, where in order to compare the two you need only exercise that scroll wheel a bit). It looks a bit cluttered right now, and Selim (right in the middle there) gets lost, but the colour will put the focus back on him.

Some of the line weights are a bit inappropriate, so I might fudge those in Photoshop later.

Thank you to everyone who took the time to help me out with my multiple-choice difficulties! It started out with Option 4 taking a pretty strong lead. Option 1 was sort of like a tag-along – it seems like people who liked 1 also liked 4, and 4 gained the most weight. But then Option 3 started to pick up steam late in the day!

Unfortunately for 3, if you put it in context, it doesn’t work as well as 1 or 4. So I’ve tightened up 4 a bit (you can see that above) and printed it off (you can see that below). This page comes between 19 and 20 in Chapter 4, so I’ll be pencilling it in about two weeks. I’ll share the line art when it’s done!

(FWIW, I shove a “Gradient Map” adjustment layer at the top of the layer stack, with one end representing 15% Cyan. Print it out, and when you scan it in again, and you can just pull out the blue, leaving the lovely line art.)

For a page in “The Oriental Lieutenant”. Without me providing anything so trivial as “context”, which of the four images above do you prefer?

I’m aware that, as an author, I’m not traditionally allowed to do this sort of thing. But this is the Internet! The twenty-first century’s Wild West! Anything goes!

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